A Happy Sunday

   Yesterday was Sunday. The sun was shining and the birds were singing. It was a beautiful day! The whole day, I played with my family and had a really good time. 
  In the morning, we got up late and ate breakfast outside. Then we went shopping. We bought a lot of food in the supermarket. After lunch, we drove to the People's Park. My little brother and I rode many rides, such as the merry-go-round, airplane ride, bumper cars. We also saw many animals.

  In the afternoon, we had a picnic on the grass. We flew kites and played checkers.
  It was a happy Sunday, and we all had fun!
【作者】吴梦依  致远朗文 朗文国际1级（任课老师：Jenice）
【就读】景德镇第五中学 初二
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