I love my family

Hello!My name is FengTangLei.My english name is Polo.I’m in grade five、class nine.

I’m a happy boy because I am happy everyday.I have a happy family,there are four people in my family.They are father、mother、grandmother and me.

I have a happy father.He is “tall” and he likes reading books very much;he is my good friend.

I have a beautiful mother.She wears beautiful clothes everyday.

I have a nice grandmother.We go to the park every Sunday.She really does love me.I love her very much,too!

This is my family.It is my happy family.I love my family.I love everyone in my family.

【作者】冯唐磊 致远朗文 Level 2（任课老师：Elsa）

【就读】景德镇第一小学 五年级

【点评】通过对这个家庭及其成员的描述，让我们身临其境的感受到作者的幸福家庭，一些词语的运用，如I’m in...,I have,really does，like doing等恰到好处，体现了作者短语词组的运用,一般现在时态的正确运用体现了学员扎实的语法知识。平时多积累单词词汇，以后写作内容会更加丰富精彩.